Welcome, to the world of emotional foolery
World of heart’s rules-
vulnerable words
As hope the living clue.
Innocence,
Twisted by prudes
Fading, slightly and slowly is
the virgin truth!
Heart beats
(ah! my living clue).
Here he comes…
False, false, false-
And yet so true
Alas! the remaining clue of my life.
Gosh! I cry out aloud…
Impossible!!
Foolery
So caught me…
And no one is spared.
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16 comments:
Don't you just love how your heart just allows some people in all willy nilly and then you have to deal with the aftermath? Sigh... :-)
I have been there many times. I love how you worded this. Nicely done.
just beautiful thank you and god bless
very well penned emotions by you here....
though poetry is never so easy for me....and personally when ever i try it becomes a prose in the end....but undoubtedly you are very good at it...:))
best wishes,
irfan.
Innocence,
Twisted by prudes
Fading, slightly and slowly is
the virgin truth!
Heart beats
(ah! my living clue).
Very touching and full of emotions....
Hemant
http://childrensheaven.blogspot.com
Brilliant shade of emotions expressed Nabo..,this is something well thought and from heart..,exceptional piece and intelligent writing :)
Hey Tameka,
Very well said...yep! that's what I have been trying to do so far...follow my heart...no matter where it leads! :) Thanks!
@Roy Durham,
Thank you for your appreciation and blessings.:)
@Irfanuddin
Thank you so much for your wishes and compliments!!! well,...poetry is sometimes tough to pen down, true!..never mind I am hoping to read a good piece of prose from you then! Creativity in any form rocks!
@Hemant...yes they are indeed...very close to my heart! Thanks :)
@Hemant...yes they are indeed...very close to my heart! Thanks :)
@...thank you sweetheart :) had been trying to write it for quite sometime. finally made it!!! :)
Beautifully articulated expressions Nira. I have never been able to fathom the source of these poetic delights, simple because I'm not a poet. I'm certain that this rhythmic journey of yours has a long path ahead, and its beautifully adorned with more such gems of your mindful creation.
Thanks diya...ya i myself don't have any idea about these ideas or expressions for that matter...just a stream of thoughts collaborated and put down in words...and i wish this rhythmic journey never ends! I love to live in this world :)
The heart can be so foolish. Beautiful poetry
http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/06/timelessnessa-collaboration.html
@rimly...it always is...that what we love about it..thank you;)
beautifully composed...a definite delight to read...great work done....cheers!!!
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